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Post by .:Drenchy:. on Oct 10, 2007 14:31:49 GMT -5
Name: FrostBite
Past/Future Names: Frostkit, Frostpaw
Gender: Male
Clan: StarClan
Moons: almost 37 (old, when he died)
Position: Deputy
Appearance: Pure white, long hair with small, scattered blue flecks on his back and the top of his head. His eyes are blue, as well.
Personality: He was rough, a good leader, but has a sweet, soft side. Now that he's an elder, he's learned more respect through his years of training and such.
History: Clan born. Grew up with only one sister [she'll come soon... maybe... unless i make her in starclan...] he trained with a mentor alone (his mentor always wanted him to train my himself) until he became a warrior, when he fell in love with [don't know her name yet but, snowstar's mom]. He soon became deputy after so his kits were still allowed. but a heavy winter came and there was a giant snowfall. Sadly, he was frozen in his sleep.
RP Example: Snowstar padded through the Winterclan woods alone. She suddenly felt a prang of warmth. She whipped her head around and stopped in front of her. She couldn't believe her eyes. Dad?! She blinked and his image was gone. She sighed, No, he's gone. May StarClan keep him safe. She kept walking on, suddenly feeling surrounded by his presence and support. She held her head up as she walked.
Quick Description: Handsome, long haired, white tom with blue flecks on his back and the top of his head and blue eyes.
Other: (i'll make a bio for snowstar's mom eventually... i think...)
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Post by K a r m a on Oct 10, 2007 17:15:30 GMT -5
Perfect!! Accepted!! It IS a bit short though.. for example, appearance, personality, and history should be at least 5 sentences each. But of course, I'm not too picky about that kind of thing. It's great!! ^^
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